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[Rhyzen]

Well basically me and a bunch of other people in another forum(sorry for mentioning it I hope I don't get an infraction for it) got bored with the "saving Miu arc" being dragged on for far too long and we decided to make a "what I want to happen after the arc is done"

http://www.docdroid....chi-s.docx.html here's the link and password is 1234

Note:It is pretty much just a basic over view since I did not want to spend too much time on it so there are no dialogues.

Edit: This is only the first half of the story.

Edited by Rhyzen, April 05 2012 - 09:15 PM.

[Koko]

Hmm, Kenichi leaving Ryozanpaku, that's a nice twist.

[Rimi]

Whoa, that is long! I'm going to have to read it after I finish my homework...lol I wonder when that will be. ;

You should invite your friends here too. :3

[Rhyzen]

If you think that it's long, then you'd probably be whining about the second half. lol

[Rimi]

If you think that it's long, then you'd probably be whining about the second half. lol

It's just too long for me to abandon my homework for.

[Saiga]

I will DL this tomorrow when I'm on my computer. And hopefully will have enough time to read it sometime over spring break.

[Rhyzen]

It's just too long for me to abandon my homework for.

Yeah I understand. been there done that situation for me.

[Rimi]

Now if only I would get off this site...

[Rhyzen]

I will DL this tomorrow when I'm on my computer. And hopefully will have enough time to read it sometime over spring break.

It's fairly short. and could usually just take 2 minutes

[Rimi]

It's fairly short. and could usually just take 2 minutes

Pssst.

All of us are lazy butts.

[Saiga]

Pssst.

All of us are lazy butts.

Yuuuup. :v

[Rimi]

I've been wanting to add some new sections to the site, but I'm too lazy I just don't have the time.

[Rhyzen]

Haha I can't be since my job requires me to be active. I don't want to lose that source.

[Rimi]

Alright so I finally read it. My main problem though is the huge time gap with how long they didn't talk. And kenichi doing mubyoshi after mubyoshi is pretty unrealistic...nor can I imagine him going so dark. But the whole Miu hating Kenichi thing makes sense. So basically it was good at the beginning, but didn't really fit with the story as it went on.

[Saiga]

I just got reminded of this.

Thank god for quickoffice on Android.