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[Berrick]

This is a Fanfic about what would happen in a fight between the Ogata and Akira
 
 
Writer's notes: 
 
1. This takes place 3 years after the ending of series.
2. Akira's stats how improved slighty
3. Ogata improved Seidou Goui. He can now instantly turn it on or off without a stance
4. Nanba Hashiri is a running style that increases speed (The technique Miu and Rimi use)

5. Ogata has a new technique
 
 
 
 
Ogata and Akira find themselves in a altercation. Ogata says "Ohhh!! Did I anger you Hongo?!" Akira says "Now is not the time for words!" Both release their ki, trying to intimidate each other.
 
"Ogata activates Seidou Goui. Akira charges at Ogata. Ogata throws a roundhouse kick at Akira's head. Akira blocks, grimacing in pain from the power of the blow. Ogata than uses a push kick to push Akira several feet. Ogata immediately deactives Seidou Goui, he than taunts Akira, signaling with his hand for Akira to come at him. Akira throws a volley of punches and kicks at Ogata, putting him of the defensive.
 
Ogata waits for the right moment to parry a punch, than he throws Akira. Ogata lets go mid throw, launching Akira several feet in the air. Ogata lets go, so Akira will correct himself and flip over in mid air, before landing on his feet. Before Akira landed on the ground, Ogata started a spinning side kick. The timing was excellent, Ogata hit him with his side kick a few seconds after Akira landed.
 
Akira barely blocked and skidded a few feet. Akira, just for a moment, took his eyes off Ogata while focusing on the impact of the blow. Ogata was gone. Akira suddenly realized Ogata was behind him. Ogata had already reactivated Seidou Goui. Akira couldn't manage to turn fast enough, all he could manage is to turn his side towards Ogata in that short amount of time. Akira raised his knee above his waist, and lower his elbow on to his knee to block, the anticipated blow. Ogata hit Akira's guard with, a powerful punch. Ogata than let out a yell, suddenly increasing the power of his punch and blowing Akira back. Ogata deactivates Seidou Goui.
 
 
Akira than...
 
 
 
Ending 1
 Akira than uses one of his secret techniques, Yin and Yang Pole Wave Trampling (the technique where Akira uses many afterimages to surround his opponent). Ogata responds with his own secret technique, Seidou Goui Nanba Hashiri Combo (A high speed combo, combining the speed of the Seidou Goui, with the speed of the Nanba Hashiri running style). Ogata attacks each clone with his technique, with blinding speed. Akira takes a death stance, to make sure he able to fatally wound Ogata. Both of them pierce each other and die.
 
 
Ending 2
Akira than uses his ultimate technique, Ultimate Obliteration Spear Hand. Ogata reactivates Seidou Goui. Ogata decides to use the power of Seidou Goui to stop Akira ultimate technique. Ogata is successful. Ogata lifts him up before Akira can do anything further. He than lets Akira fall, than pierces him with his hand, hitting a vital organ. Akira dies impaled on Ogata's arm

 

 

Ending 3

Akira than uses his ultimate technique, Ultimate Obliteration Spear Hand. Ogata reactivates Seidou Goui. Ogata decides to use the power of Seidou Goui to stop Akira's ultimate technique. Ogata appears to be successful. Akira than uses God Hand Leg Wave Twist Thrust (the move where Akira kicks his elbow to increase the power of his thrust). Although Ogata was able to stop him from going all the way through his body, Akira hit a vital organ. Ogata collapsed and died.

 

 

 

Choose which ending you like and tell me what you think.

Edited by ki0, November 16 2014 - 11:02 PM.

[Combatmaster1o3]

This is a Fanfic about what would happen in a fight between the Ogata and Akira
 
 
Writer's notes: 
 
1. This takes place 3 years after the ending of series.
2. Akira's stats how improved slighty
3. Ogata improved Seidou Goui. He can now instantly turn it on or off without a stance
4. Nanba Hashiri is a running style that increases speed (The technique Miu and Rimi use)

5. Ogata has a new technique
 
 
 
 
Ogata and Akira find themselves in a altercation. Ogata says "Ohhh!! Did I anger you Hongo?!" Akira says "Now is not the time for words!" Both release their ki, trying to intimidate each other.
 
"Ogata activates Seidou Goui. Akira charges at Ogata. Ogata throws a roundhouse kick at Akira's head. Akira blocks, grimacing in pain from the power of the blow. Ogata than uses a push kick to push Akira several feet. Ogata immediately deactives Seidou Goui, he than taunts Akira, signaling with his hand for Akira to come at him. Akira throws a volley of punches and kicks at Ogata, putting him of the defensive.
 
Ogata waits for the right moment to parry a punch, than he throws Akira. Ogata lets go mid throw, launching Akira several feet in the air. Ogata lets go, so Akira will correct himself and flip over in mid air, before landing on his feet. Before Akira landed on the ground, Ogata started a spinning side kick. The timing was excellent, Ogata hit him with his side kick a few seconds after Akira landed.
 
Akira barely blocked and skidded a few feet. Akira, just for a moment, took his eyes off Ogata while focusing on the impact of the blow. Ogata was gone. Akira suddenly realized Ogata was behind him. Ogata had already reactivated Seidou Goui. Akira couldn't manage to turn fast enough, all he could manage is to turn his side towards Ogata in that short amount of time. Akira raised his knee above his waist, and lower his elbow on to his knee to block, the anticipated blow. Ogata hit Akira's guard with, a powerful punch. Ogata than let out a yell, suddenly increasing the power of his punch and blowing Akira back. Ogata deactivates Seidou Goui.
 
 
Akira than...
 
 
 
Ending 1
 Akira than uses one of his secret techniques, Yin and Yang Pole Wave Trampling (the technique where Akira uses many afterimages to surround his opponent). Ogata responds with his own secret technique, Seidou Goui Nanba Hashiri Combo (A high speed combo, combining the speed of the Seidou Goui, with the speed of the Nanba Hashiri running style). Ogata attacks each clone with his technique, with blinding speed. Akira takes a death stance, to make sure he able to fatally wound Ogata. Both of them pierce each other and die.
 
 
Ending 2
Akira than uses his ultimate technique, Ultimate Obliteration Spear Hand. Ogata reactivates Seidou Goui. Ogata decides to use the power of Seidou Goui to stop Akira ultimate technique. Ogata is successful. Ogata lifts him up before Akira can do anything further. He than lets Akira fall, than pierces him with his hand, hitting a vital organ. Akira dies impaled on Ogata's arm

 

 

Ending 3

Akira than uses his ultimate technique, Ultimate Obliteration Spear Hand. Ogata reactivates Seidou Goui. Ogata decides to use the power of Seidou Goui to stop Akira's ultimate technique. Ogata appears to be successful. Akira than uses God Hand Leg Wave Twist Thrust (the move where Akira kicks his elbow to increase the power of his thrust). Although Ogata was able to stop him from going all the way through his body, Akira hit a vital organ. Ogata collapsed and died.

 

 

 

Choose which ending you like and tell me what you think.

It Sei dou was never turned on by a stance. However, interesting proposition. I seems, unfortunately, like there some bias to Ogata's power. I'm gonna make my own ending.

 

      Hongo has improved signifacantly(Why do you think Hongo can't improve) along with Ogata.

Akira has trying to make up his past in his own way, hunting down the people who he thinks pollute the world(People like Jenazad, Mikumo, and Ogata).

 

They meet up, have the scuffle you speak of, then Hongo has gauged his enemy. He preforms Yin and Yang Pole Wave Trampling attempt to confuse Ogata, who notices too late where he really is, in which Akira and Ogata exchange strong exchanges of defense and offense of the highest level. Ogata, noticing Akira's improvements, decides not to push himself to death with Sie Dou. Hongo and Ogata presume their death match.... 

 

continue from here on more even grounds.

Edited by Combatmaster1o3, November 18 2014 - 09:38 AM.

[Berrick]

lol, I am a bit bias. I'm a Ogata fan...

 

 

but you came up with a good mini fanfic. You should remake this battle or make another fight fanfic. I think you might do better than me. I was trying to come up with a good motivation for this fight, but couldn't think of anything. The motivation you came up seems to fit with Akira's character... 

 

The reason Akira only improved slightly in the fanfic, is because I forgot that masters can improve quickly over a short period of time. I probably could of made it a little more even if I tried harder, but I wanted to make it a battle where Ogata was in the lead...

 

 

If anybody else wants to, you should make your own endings too. I enjoy reading other people's fanfics (especially if there centered around interesting fights).

Edited by ki0, November 18 2014 - 11:34 AM.

[Combatmaster1o3]

Thanks! I tried to come up with something on the fly. I'll post something longer tomorrow, just need some time to brainstorm.